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They don't make 'em like me no more!!! I decided to create this blog so I am able to creatively express my thoughts and feelings. Twitter just wasn't doing it for me. I want this to be an interactive experience so feel free to comment, debate, argue, whatever...no rules here :)

Thursday, November 12, 2009

In the Moment

*Disclaimer...inspired not necessarily true

In The Moment


I knew after the 1st night,
that you’d be soon out of sight

But I decided to live for the moment,
even if it was never really meant

I became in luv with the thought,
So my mind and my heart fought

A battle that neither could win,
but would lose in the end

See I thought I was feeling bliss,
and just didn’t wanna lose this

With every touch and every kiss,
he’d reminensce bout what he missed

And I’d pretend I was her, hoping for
the moment it would become more

But it never came.

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So tell me what you think. I got frustrated so I rushed the end and I would like feedback about if you think I should say more or leave it. It's not my best but I'm working on getting it back.

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